100 Word Challenge 3

It was a brand new day at St Josephs school in Oamaru. When I walked up to the class- room I saw something interesting like a new pet! It was a rabbit. Her name was Paris and she was a cuddly and happy rabbit. That afternoon at morning tea, Lily and Athena fed Paris. They got distracted and Paris jumped out! I thought to myself " well what a start!" We managed to catch her barely and put her back into her cage. Lily and Athena walked off laughing forgetting to feed Paris.

By Athena


  1. Hi Athena I really like your story its really good keep up the good work.

  2. Hi Athena,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
    Pets can be a lot of hard work. Your story reminded me of a time when our little puppy ran away from us and out on the road. There was a huge panic until we caught him again.
    I'm not sure that Lily and Athena are up to the responsibility of looking after a pet.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce


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